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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Creaking Caress

    This reminded me of an exercise in a class where we had to modernize John Donne's works. Whilst this is not at the same level of Donne's sonnets (for example) ...

    Jan 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: We Accept the Love We Think We Deserve

    Hello there, There are several main issues with this that jumped out at me; Pacing, Telling-not-showing, Voice, Conflict Resolution and dialogue. With regards to Pacing, I found you spent too ...

    Jan 7, 2013


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