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Re: Don't Speak: Chapter Six
Wow is all I can say to this one. I thought your best character by far was Damien! You did an awesome job constructing him. I mean, it really felt ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Think of the best tile ever, then add "...: Chapter One". That's this things title. Enjoy.
I thought you did a god damn gnarly job of writing this mate. You weren't afraid to curse, you played the part, you did what you had to do, and ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: The price I must pay.
I thought you did an excellent job with this piece. Keep up the great writing! From a critique standpoint, I feel like in the middle of the piece, you shifted ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: DELETED
Wow the ending was absolutely marvelous. Tun really spoke to me as a character and I felt I really connected with him. As for all of the other great characters, ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: See you
I think you did a greattttt job here. I can't say I completely understand the subtext you're using, but the prefuctoral metaphors are simply a work of magic. Keep writing ...
Jul 28, 2014