alabasterwolveness

Hey There! I loved your writing style! It was different then what I have read which really intrests me! I'd love to read more of your work! If that will ...

Hiya! How ya doing? Good I hope! WEll your peom was very nice! Though I do say that the para's do tend to change length but never format! Which is ...

Hiya! Please dont take my review harshly! You can take my advice if you want to, if not then I understand! In my house, The walls are unstable, There is ...

Heyy Oliver! Im here to finish your last request on your piece of work! I liked your other poems a lot! They are very different then what I have read, ...

Hiya! Haha well lets get started! Reflections of a Nomad Foreclosure is the only outcome to this mortgage add the word In which has indebted me an existence of normality ...

First off... This is WAY to long, from the sight of it I didnt want to read it at all! Its so scary looking to a reader that they probably ...

Well Hey! Well I have to say this didnt flow together at all. The words where just out there, they had no meaning to one another nor to the subject ...

This was actually a great poem that I have read all day! I like the mood it sets, the way the words are placed and choiced by the poet. The ...

I think poem is great. You stay on one topic and it was depressing but you can see some what a different emotion. Now your word choice can be better ...

Ok first off this is really confusing! Your chioce of words can be better as well as the flow of the format. Sadly... I could barely understand this let alone ...

I like it alot, its very consistant with the subject. But I could say that you can make the words flow together more to make the reader want to keep ...

Hiya! Well first off... I have to say Im not a poet but I do enjoy some poetry, anyways. Im a writer and since this is narrative poetry, I can ...

Alright well, for me being a story writer. I think this was easy to follow, they all blended in together to make a good story. But what I think you ...

Ok, this is just me but I dont really get the song at all... Did he reject your affection for him? Im not so good at reading these and stuff. ...

Alrighty hun, I really like the emotion in this, its simple and sweet. I mean its from the heart and not from the brain. I can see how bad you ...