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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Vampire Bite

    A whimper of fright I let go With fright I yell "Help!" You used fright twice D; it sorta doesnt sound like it fits xP Two fangs withdraw from my ...

    Oct 31, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon's Rage

    I thought it was a rather funny story, it was pretty good for a first. Just needs the above mentioned spacing, and I agree with the other guy, maybe put ...

    Oct 30, 2007


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage