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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor Re: Just Like My Brother

    This was a simple, feel good story that I actually really liked. "I At the age of twenty-one, the alcohol age, Timothy flew off the handle. He’s exactly a decade ...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 13 (part 1)

    I really like the progression of the story; it was easy to follow and straightforward. Great work on exposition in the story. There were still some small misspellings and usages ...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In which Emmaline sees the Court

    Interesting start, but there are a few things that could be changed. First, I would like to see some dialogue between the characters. Exposition is good but there needs to ...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Dark Eyes, Dark Hearts, Chapter 1.

    Good start off overall. I got a good sense of what kind of person the main character was. But echoing other reviews, this story is a bit cliched. Other than ...

    Mar 18, 2015


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling