akimble1

This was a simple, feel good story that I actually really liked. "I At the age of twenty-one, the alcohol age, Timothy flew off the handle. He’s exactly a decade ...

I really like the progression of the story; it was easy to follow and straightforward. Great work on exposition in the story. There were still some small misspellings and usages ...

Interesting start, but there are a few things that could be changed. First, I would like to see some dialogue between the characters. Exposition is good but there needs to ...

Good start off overall. I got a good sense of what kind of person the main character was. But echoing other reviews, this story is a bit cliched. Other than ...