airforcegirl

this is extremely well written, once i started reading i really liked it, then when he stabbed her i couldnt keep my eyes off the screen, even though i dont ...

dude! this is extremely well written i love it! i cant find much to fix at this point, defiantly continue on with this i cant wait to see how it ...

this is great i really like it! is this a whole book? is there more? i would love to read the whole thing if there is! the one sentence should ...

its really good i like it, He was told that a big bottle of bourbon wouldn't help. He did it anyway with this you might want to add a coma ...

this is very interesting, im Cristian myself, this was an interesting interpretation of what would happen with the rapture, i dont know much about it but i was really good, ...

awesome piece of writing the last 3 words is what really hooked me! pm me when you put up more! though you need to further explain the deal with the ...

this is truly a phenomenal piece of writing! i really want to read the rest of this! its really confusing after she is shot, i get that she is an ...

i liked this, it would make for a really good play! im interested if you do ever finish it! spelling is off a little but of course all writers get ...