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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Midnight

    A great poem which also think is very easy to relate to i love the last stanza it's very interesting and shows a great understanding your poem as a whole. ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When Death Came

    Hi, This poem is beautifully structured and i usually don't like short poems but i love this one. I lost my nana a few years ago and this has summed ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Dancing Trees

    I've got to be honest, I don't really like this poem, there doesn't seem to be any sort of structure to it and i don't really have a clue what ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: The Hunger Games Fan Poem

    I know this has already been said to you before but I would love to see you extend this into a song perhaps. I'm a huge fan of the hunger ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love is like a secret

    This poem really spoke to me, I love it. My favorite line is 'Love is the boss, I'm still looking for employment' cause this is currently how i'm feeling and ...

    Dec 24, 2013


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