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Re: Desperate for your love
I've read one of the other related series, ahhhhh! what is it called! but its really good There is the Christy Miller series.
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: The Girl I Met Today
Showing your feelings is not crappy. Girls like guys who show their feelings.
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: A Haiku
HAHAHAHA
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: In My Heart (Across the Universe)
Here's the revised version: I look out to the window out to the sea. You and me going across what the mind can see, over the moon I can touch ...
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: Why I Hate Liking You
I like the the teen agnst and the grit in this poem.
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: Seasons
It felt seriouly rushed and the writing seemed flat . Even though it's a haiku it should be interesting. Sorry ,I feel so bad saying this :( .
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: In My Heart (Across the Universe)
Please reply!!! :( :( :( :(
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Story Deleted
I love the perfect relevance to history. That's always nice. I thought the story was nicely written. :D
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: The Strong Arrow
She seems like she found the perfect guy!!! I loved how you wrote the story. I can't wait until you expand on this story. My writing camp teacher said that ...
Jan 25, 2008