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Thank you so much!!! yeah I`ll try writing more :)

thankk youuu ... I do have a problem with verb consistencies :( Btw, thank youu

So sweet of you BlackCrow thank you :) Let`s support each other :)

Welcomee, continue writing more :)

Ohh.. That`s what my English teacher taught me too. :) Maybe there`s a new rule? :) BTW, thanks Aeros :)

I almost lose grip of my atheism because of you :( I really admire theists (I bet you are) like you who`s really what I call a "Son of God". ...

No.. It was based on my actual experience during high school days :) Didn`t have good HS years :(

Sorry :( I just learned that author`s notes should be placed after the whole story. My bad :(

Thank youuu for the effort. I learned a lot from you. :)

Thanks !

I like it though I agree with other reviewers that some of your paragraphs are too long. It was really tiring to read but it was worth it

THANK YOU SO MUCHH ,,,!,,,, actually it`s a homework given to us by our world literature professor. She wanted us to write our own version of "Odyssey" using our personal ...

THANK YOU SO MUCHH ,,,!,,,, actually it`s a homework given to us by our world literature professor. She wanted us to write our own version of "Odyssey" using our personal ...

THANK YOU SO MUCHH ,,,!,,,, actually it`s a homework given to us by our world literature professor. She wanted us to write our own version of "Odyssey" using our personal ...

I like it though I agree with other reviewers that some of your paragraphs are too long. It was really tiring to read but it was worth it