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Re: When Games Come to Life (chapter 1)
Thank you so much for the review, I will get started on fixing things and making changes here right away!
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: When Games Come to Life (chapter 1)
Thank you for your review, I will definitely edit this story... It clearly needs it!
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Dusk
thank you for the review! I actually wrote this poem a long time ago, I just wanted to see what people would think. I'm really not much of a poet. ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: Dusk
OK thank you! I'll see what I can do to improve.
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: Sea Side Memories
aww thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: Sea Side Memories
It does help. Thank you very much for the feed back!
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: Sea Side Memories
yeah I was a little lost for titles when I posted it. Do you know if you can go back and change them?
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: Sea Side Memories
thank you for your feed back! I'll definitely take it into account.
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: Adieu
wonderful short-story, and very well written! Despite the lack of background knowledge to the character's situation I find I can still feel her sense of urgency and sorrow. It would ...
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: The Stone Project
wow this is really good! I love the way you introduce the characters, you make them seem very life like and full of animation.
Jan 15, 2013