adale15es

Thank you so much for the review, I will get started on fixing things and making changes here right away!

Thank you for your review, I will definitely edit this story... It clearly needs it!

thank you for the review! I actually wrote this poem a long time ago, I just wanted to see what people would think. I'm really not much of a poet. ...

OK thank you! I'll see what I can do to improve.

aww thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

It does help. Thank you very much for the feed back!

yeah I was a little lost for titles when I posted it. Do you know if you can go back and change them?

thank you for your feed back! I'll definitely take it into account.

wonderful short-story, and very well written! Despite the lack of background knowledge to the character's situation I find I can still feel her sense of urgency and sorrow. It would ...

wow this is really good! I love the way you introduce the characters, you make them seem very life like and full of animation.