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Thank you for the review! I'll change those things right away.

Thanks for the review! I'll work on the last stanza.

Thank you for the review! I'll change that.

Thank you for the great review!

Thank you for the great review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

No problem!

No problem!

You're welcome!

Though this poem was short, the rhythm was very nice and it flowed very well even without a rhyme. I liked line five where it caught your attention by going ...

Great poem! I don't really have anything I would change except for the part about the old man. Is he the girl's father? Her grandfather? I really liked the descriptions, ...

Thank you! I'll definitely follow your advice.

Thanks for the review! I tried to keep it short, but maybe I'll add an ending to it.

If you made stairs singular, then it would be a perfect rhyme: Air/stair, but since stairs was plural, it's a near rhyme. As for the commas, I'll go right back ...

Thank you for your review! It was really helpful. I'll go back and change those things.

Great poem! It put a lot of great images into my mind, and the daisy metaphor was really good. I loved the wording and details. Good job!