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Re: The footsteps
Hi Maia. :) First off, I'm a musician before a writer and I like the rhythm in this poem. It is very clean. As others have pointed out, you did ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: I'll make you regret the day you gave up on me.-DAR
Hi eversodarling. I was very impressed with this piece. It portrays hurt, but I like that punch of strength at the end. This is ironically exactly what I am going ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: Staccato
Hi SkyeDreamer. I thoroughly enjoyed this. It is relatable, and rough. You have a nice style. I would like to mention, I did not quite understand "The heights I once ...
Oct 5, 2013