aVeryThoughtfulBeing

Well yes he dies, but he still exists in some way. It's whatever you perceive it to be.

Another good review, thanks. I'm pleased with the fact that you see something in it, and can see where you're coming from about being repetitious or a little boring. Looking ...

Thanks for the great review, apparently it is a little repetitious, but I wouldn't want to sacrifice anything besides what you suggested, saying "Sense of self sensed something else" once. ...

Get and respect your point, but it wasn't supposed to be of any complexity, I wanted to use that sound in "self" through most of it because it would be ...

Thank you for the appreciation :) And yeah you're totally right about that, I hadn't considered that and the reason being because I write everything in a journal and tend ...

"Just to defeat this creature, Called another day" I loved this line most of all. And you're speaking of the hell which is your life, and while reading I wonder ...