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Zoreo18

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Friendship

    This kind of things usually happen in life. It's hard to see someones true colors. I really liked the poem. The ending was very powerful. Keep writting. :)

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Becoming the Watcher

    The thought of the poem was nice specially the ending. Keep writting :)

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I'll go wherever you will go

    Thank you for your suggestions. I will put some changes :)

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Roses are red...

    It was such a cute story, but why did the dad do so? Nice poem by the way. Keep it up :)

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I'll go wherever you will go

    Thank you for your suggestions. I made some changes with it. Pls correct them again if you must :)

    May 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Heartbreaker 1

    Thank you for all your suggestions.

    May 7, 2011


Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs