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Re: Friendship
This kind of things usually happen in life. It's hard to see someones true colors. I really liked the poem. The ending was very powerful. Keep writting. :)
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Becoming the Watcher
The thought of the poem was nice specially the ending. Keep writting :)
May 7, 2011 -
Re: I'll go wherever you will go
Thank you for your suggestions. I will put some changes :)
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Roses are red...
It was such a cute story, but why did the dad do so? Nice poem by the way. Keep it up :)
May 7, 2011 -
Re: I'll go wherever you will go
Thank you for your suggestions. I made some changes with it. Pls correct them again if you must :)
May 7, 2011 -
Re: The Heartbreaker 1
Thank you for all your suggestions.
May 7, 2011
