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  • Art » Fantasy, Horror Re: The whole beginning

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    , been a while since I've read one of these. You captured their personalities; Jeff is still the Jeff everyone hates loves, Ben likes video games because he was originally ...

    Dec 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Hostage - A Creepypasta story

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    Ah, been a while since I've read one of these. You captured their personalities; Jeff is still the Jeff everyone hates loves, Ben likes video games because he was originally ...

    Dec 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Yokai Village Chapter 1 the Encounter

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    That was an amazing story. I love the way you write. You are making a great progress. A little bit of technical vocab might make it better though!

    Dec 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Yokai Village Chapter 1 the Encounter

    Thats amazing, great start!

    Dec 13, 2020


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price