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Re: The whole beginning
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Dec 13, 2020
, been a while since I've read one of these. You captured their personalities; Jeff is still the Jeff everyone hates loves, Ben likes video games because he was originally ... -
Re: Hostage - A Creepypasta story
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Dec 13, 2020
Ah, been a while since I've read one of these. You captured their personalities; Jeff is still the Jeff everyone hates loves, Ben likes video games because he was originally ... -
Re: The Yokai Village Chapter 1 the Encounter
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Dec 13, 2020
That was an amazing story. I love the way you write. You are making a great progress. A little bit of technical vocab might make it better though! -
Re: The Yokai Village Chapter 1 the Encounter
Thats amazing, great start!
Dec 13, 2020