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Woah, you review sooo fast, I only just posted this! Thank you so much. Those tense changes were really helpful! Hopefully I%u2019ll get the hang of this soon! Yeah theres ...

Thanks for your review! Appreciated

Hi Lau Thanks for your feedback! One of the reasons I dont write poetry is because I prefer not to write so directly about emotions etc, so here Ive tried ...

Sorry if I was unclear about that. I was referring to how chapter 1 sets up Anya and Elmund's backstory and their individual storyline, how they live purposely isolated due ...

I see, that now makes sense. Thanks for clarifying, because I just read the next chapter and I definitely needed to know this. Viper's anger really makes sense to me, ...

Hey. I understood that the host doesn%u2019t understand they are a host, that%u2019s why I suggested it would be more intense to see things from her perspective rather from those ...

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No worries, glad to help. I noticed an improvement just between the first two! I'll be sure to check the rest out, hopefully today. And yes please do tag me ...

Thanks for the reply :) will you continue to post the chapters?

Hi Saen Apologies I didnt include any nice comments, I will be sure to do that going forward. The parts of your story I enjoy relate to the Caspen dynamic, ...

Thanks so much for your review, Pan! The concerns youve raised about the dead parent trope is my biggest concern at the moment, so Ive got my thinking cap on. ...

Thanks for such a detailed review! Appreciated

I see your predicament about "they" having multiple meanings. And I totally get how important it is for some degas to be NB. I guess there was no way of ...

Nah change away if you want! Personally it would help me keep track of your characterisations for each twin :)