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No worries at all! ^_^ Look forward to the next chapter! You haven't posted yet right?

Whoops, forgot quotes go a bit funny when I use my phone I called the game forty forty, but I%u2019ve also heard the name run outs too haha

I used to play this as a kid and we called it %u201CForty forty%u201D (there is a small Wikipedia page for this game) When we moved house, the kids in ...

Thanks - I see what you mean about the soap opera comment. You can thank my melodramatic dialog for that haha ^_^

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Oh haha that might be my bad, then. Sometimes I can be too literal. Now you%u2019ve told me it seems really obvious. ^_^ Hildegarde is amazing. The sass. When she ...

Thanks for the review! Appreciated

Oh yes I forgot to mention, please tag me. I really did like the simplicity of this piece!

Can I ask the reason behind the neutral pronouns? Because it was very confusing to know when you actually meant they/them as a group of characters or if you were ...

Thanks a lot for your review. I completely agree that I provided no details about the MC. I can be really minimalist with details to the point where major aspects ...

Thanks for your review and suggestions!

Oh I was wondering why the break looked a bit strange :) Please do tag me, as I said your writing was smooth to read to I wouldn%u2019t mind being ...

Woah. I haven't signed into YWS in ages. Spooky that my story picked up a review hours before my return . . . Thanks for your incredible insight. I'm particularly ...

No fan girling? :'( Haha thanks for the review! Appreciated!

This review is amazing. You have a keen eye for story structure! Your comments are going to be very useful when I rewrite! I really appreciate how you've got me ...