Zontafer

Thanks a lot! I seem to always forget the biggest details *facepalms* Do you want to be tagged for the next chapters? ^^ Thanks again. ;) - Zontafer

I said second person? *fixed*

Blackwood, you're amazing. *likes*

Yeah suure. Thanks and no problem. ^_^

Thanks for your review Wolf! I know, I know. BUT I've been writing on a later chapter as well and creating cities and such, based on how it was spread ...

Thank you for the review! About the snoring, I've added that in the 'updated' version, so sorry for that! I'll take what you said further on when editing! Thanks again! ...

Omg Alchemist I just realized that I only posted a third of the chapter! How could I be so stupid...? Anyways, thanks for the review! :) - Zontafer

Thanks for the review, Wolf! :D Perhaps I should add a small detail about the window early in the chapter, so it'll be easier to understand. Gah, I know, details ...

Thanks for the review! ^^ I agree with the position, now as I actually tried it, so thanks for that one! Haha, I'll work more on balancing dialogue and details. ...

Thanks for the review! This was written over 3 months ago, so it's a bit 'rusty', but thanks for tips! I totally agree with what you said, and I'll try ...

*Realizes this was posted 5 years ago* Wow... *facepalms*

Thanks for your review and your kind words! ^^ - Zontafer

Thanks for the review, GoldFlame! ^^ I'm surprised you liked it, compared to the other revieweres. I was considering splitting this in two/rewriting half of it, but now I'm not ...

Ahh, okay! ^^

Thanks for the review, and welcome to YWS! I'm just wondering how you find 'Happiness is when... Ideas are turned into success' as a false reality? I mean, you get ...