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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 1

    actual reminder now sent

    Thu May 19, 2016 2:54 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 1

    I am happy that you enjoyed my idea, and hope you are willing to continue reading. Hm, I had three paragraphs worth of information on his other choices, but as ...

    Thu May 19, 2016 1:23 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 1

    twas doing that as a joke

    Wed May 18, 2016 6:29 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 1

    Happy you liked it. I can understand being busy, so don't worry.

    Wed May 18, 2016 6:07 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 1

    remind given, with sparkles.

    Wed May 18, 2016 5:05 am
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: ​ The tower with one window.

    Hm, how I talk is admittedly kind of weird, that sentence you showed as a example sounds quite natural to me. Beyond that thank you, I shall keep your thoughts ...

    Thu Jan 28, 2016 5:21 am
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: ​ The tower with one window.

    Thanks for your thoughts, for my next practice short story I will take them into account. P.S Stories don't begin on the first page, nor end on the last. I ...

    Thu Jan 28, 2016 5:18 am
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Childish memories

    Happy you enjoyed, thank you.

    Fri Jan 22, 2016 6:22 am
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Childish memories

    Late reply of thank you.

    Fri Jan 22, 2016 6:21 am
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Childish memories

    Very late reply of thank you.

    Fri Jan 22, 2016 6:21 am
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: In my mind I dream.

    I disagree on the ! as it would imply excitement, I rather the tone be what ever the reader sees through these paragraphs. Hm, how would my abuse of font ...

    Sun Mar 29, 2015 5:28 am
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: In my mind I dream.

    Would it? I was not sure about if it would be other or short story. As they sort of are a collection of short short stories. I have a problem ...

    Sun Mar 29, 2015 1:49 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Denied: Chapter 1- Part 1

    Well since you offered. *pms*

    Wed Jul 02, 2014 3:42 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Denied: Chapter 1- Part 1

    *Zolen sends a attempt to explain in the hopes that maybe this person can explain how to hint at it all better.*

    Wed Jul 02, 2014 3:28 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Denied: Chapter 1- Part 1

    Yap this is a prologue in intent, however I am trying out a theory I heard that claiming it is the first part of a chapter, results in more people ...

    Wed Jul 02, 2014 2:53 am


But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane