Zexal42

Hey its me just started a day ago but here we go. Nice little poem the pacing and rhyme patterns were good and honestly allowed for an enjoyable read. For ...

This is a really good summary of the plot of The Little Mermaid (however told in a poetic way). 1. First of all, though we get a description of the ...

A short (though seemingly unfinished) poem. 1.The way you describe the moon and the sun like a duet is a great way of talking about them but you can add ...

This is one of the rare things I find in poetry someone writing poetry about something they know much about. I definitely find the different way of laying out your ...

First review so yeah lets start with the pros. 1. You use a good form of repetition which gives a good effect of the events in this poem happening again ...