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Hi Khushi! This is Zenith with a short review. I love everything about this story. Most of all, I love the unlikely narrator ( but you can tell as much ...

Hi vampricone! Zenith here with a short review. First things first, I would like to get a few edit suggestions out of the way. I have re-written some of the ...

Hi Fox! This is Zenith with a short review. Firstly, I have a question. What does the words in big black bold symbolize? Is Jeden the name of one of ...

Hey Ellie! Zenith here for a review. I am back on this site after many many months. So, needless to say, I'm rusty and probably won't be able to do ...

Hey vampricone6783! Zenith here for a short review. You have tagged this as a short story, but your work doesn't qualify as a story. It's more like a prologue. Now ...

Hey zekcede! Zenith here for a short review. I would start by saying that all of the useful suggestions I had to offer(which weren't much to begin with) had already ...

Hey akanbright! Zenith here for a review. Your poem falls in the short and sweet category. I like the main theme that you've tried to portray. The world is indeed ...

Hey BIHXY! Zenith here for a review. First of all, from what I understand, this poem mocks the idea of a marriage in which the man drags an innocent woman ...

Hey MoonIris! Zenith here to review your poem. First of all, I would like to begin with what I like about this poem. It conjures a really peaceful image of ...

Hey there! Zenith here for a review. So this is a continuation of an earlier piece titled the same. You have tried to portray the heartbreak felt by the characters ...

Hey there! Zenith here for a short review. I liked the way you began the story with elves scoffing on the existence of fairies. It's a good way to catch ...

Hey there! Zenith here for a review. First of all, let's go into the overall subject analysis. You have chosen a common theme- you have tried to put forward the ...

Hey Theia! Zenith here with a short review. I'll start with things you can improve upon and then to what I liked best about ENIGMA. First of all, you need ...

Hey there! Zenith here for a review. You have an interesting story here about two lawyers. Stories involving lawyers are always fun because they are smart people. So I was ...

Hey Carlito! So first of all I liked how focused Summer is with her band performance. The character you have developed upto now seemed too nervous everytime Micah is even ...