ZerosaBeebe

I will have to agree with the last review! This sounds like the beginning of an epic tale!! But there needs to be more back ground information. I did feel ...

I honestly loved it! The time period really drawled me in, I suppose just because I really love that the feel of it. Anyway, a few errors such as the ...

That was just amazing and I really wish you would finish it!! You have a beautiful writing style and I WILL be reading more of your (no doubt) wonderful creations! ...

I was pleasantly surprised to find this a very intense first chapter! An amazingly fast pull-in, which is great! I was immediately hooked and was tapping on the side of ...

Have you ever thought about perhaps maybe going to some sort of writers group for the youth? You're very good and I'm sure some other aspiring-to-be-authors would highly profit educationally ...

Wow! I was blown away by this -chapter? If it is then I'd love to read the next! Your characters are developing beautifully and the plot does not waver, not ...

That was very beautifully written! I do believe it could use a tad bit more of .. a show of emotion. It will help the readers feel more for the ...