Zekkie876

This was a nice piece overall, but it could use some work. Add a bit more description, and give some creative spice to it. Make the reader feel absorbed into ...

Overall I liked this poem, so good job. ^^already explained most of it so I'm just going to say a few things: The capitalized words had me going for a ...

This was a great story! I wasn't suspecting the udden twist at the end until the last paragraph. This was really well written. Just a few errors "I was ahead ...

This was amazing, for a preface There wasn't many errors, although I have a question: "Sleepless nights are common, and the thought that 'every family mus live like this' is ...

Interesting, really interesting! I have read your other two chapters and I must say, thy were amazing! You have a great imagination, and you know how to put it to ...