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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Tutoring

    Hello, I am here to review your lovely little story. I see this is your first, congrats! I'll go through what I liked about it and then I will go ...

    May 25, 2018
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Roanoke

    Hey I'm here to do a review for you. So to begin, I think you have a very interesting idea here and I don't think the executions was bad at ...

    Feb 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Gazing into the Abyss

    Hi I am here to give you a review. Congratulations on the winning and the chance for a scholar ship. I how this review helps a little. So first things ...

    Feb 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 4

    Hi, Wow I back again. Surprise surprise. I love this, it's so tragic that his place is just gone. But now I think maybe the romance is going to be ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 3

    Hi, Here to review your Fanfic. Before I begin I love Attack on Titan and anything people produce about it so this was already a winner before I started reading. ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Prologue

    Hey, So not a lot here for me to review but I'll give you what I got. So just a note ahead of time I did not read the other ...

    Oct 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Health, Romantic Re: My Concrete Porch

    Hey, So Good things first. I really liked all of your descriptions. I thought they were well done and the contrast of description to normal narration was great. Also the ...

    Sep 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: "introductions"

    Hey, Welcome to YWS! This is a great site, but anyways back to the review. So first thing I have to say nice job on the style. I see you're ...

    Aug 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The Elite - Chapter 3 - Part 1

    Hey, back again. Ooh what a rough one this one. Rough meaning on me. Man lots of action here. So I didn't see to many problems with this grammar wise. ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The Elite - Chapter 2 - Part 2

    Hey, So sorry it's been awhile huh? My computer broke and I just got it back like maybe two days ago. So I hope I'm not too late. Anyways thank ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The Elite - Chapter 2 - Part 1

    Hey, I'm going to go my best with this one because I'm on my phone; my computer is broken at the moment. So first things first this was great. I ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Plainface: Regime 91

    Hey, So I see you want reviews so might as well give into your wishes. This is a very interesting start. I liked how it began with a life threatening ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Escape My Ghosts

    Hey, This was beautiful. Really really beautiful. I relate to Rosie so much. I haven't lost my best friend but I love her as much as Rosie did Nat. You ...

    Jul 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Blank Sheet

    Damn Daniel back at it again with a review. Haha I hate myself. So to move again from my awkward intro and straight into the review this was great. Really ...

    Jul 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My Best Friend Cuts Herself

    Hey, So There is is nothing to review here but I do have things to say. This was me two years ago. I was in your position. I was the ...

    Jul 3, 2016


i like that the title of dr jekyll and mr hyde makes a clear stance that the embodiment of one’s own evil doesn’t get a claim to the doctorate
— waywardxwallflower