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Re: Tutoring
Hello, I am here to review your lovely little story. I see this is your first, congrats! I'll go through what I liked about it and then I will go ...
May 25, 2018 -
Re: Roanoke
Hey I'm here to do a review for you. So to begin, I think you have a very interesting idea here and I don't think the executions was bad at ...
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: Gazing into the Abyss
Hi I am here to give you a review. Congratulations on the winning and the chance for a scholar ship. I how this review helps a little. So first things ...
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 4
Hi, Wow I back again. Surprise surprise. I love this, it's so tragic that his place is just gone. But now I think maybe the romance is going to be ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 3
Hi, Here to review your Fanfic. Before I begin I love Attack on Titan and anything people produce about it so this was already a winner before I started reading. ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Prologue
Hey, So not a lot here for me to review but I'll give you what I got. So just a note ahead of time I did not read the other ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: My Concrete Porch
Hey, So Good things first. I really liked all of your descriptions. I thought they were well done and the contrast of description to normal narration was great. Also the ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: "introductions"
Hey, Welcome to YWS! This is a great site, but anyways back to the review. So first thing I have to say nice job on the style. I see you're ...
Aug 19, 2016 -
Re: The Elite - Chapter 3 - Part 1
Hey, back again. Ooh what a rough one this one. Rough meaning on me. Man lots of action here. So I didn't see to many problems with this grammar wise. ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: The Elite - Chapter 2 - Part 2
Hey, So sorry it's been awhile huh? My computer broke and I just got it back like maybe two days ago. So I hope I'm not too late. Anyways thank ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: The Elite - Chapter 2 - Part 1
Hey, I'm going to go my best with this one because I'm on my phone; my computer is broken at the moment. So first things first this was great. I ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: Plainface: Regime 91
Hey, So I see you want reviews so might as well give into your wishes. This is a very interesting start. I liked how it began with a life threatening ...
Jul 4, 2016 -
Re: Escape My Ghosts
Hey, This was beautiful. Really really beautiful. I relate to Rosie so much. I haven't lost my best friend but I love her as much as Rosie did Nat. You ...
Jul 3, 2016 -
Re: Blank Sheet
Damn Daniel back at it again with a review. Haha I hate myself. So to move again from my awkward intro and straight into the review this was great. Really ...
Jul 3, 2016 -
Re: My Best Friend Cuts Herself
Hey, So There is is nothing to review here but I do have things to say. This was me two years ago. I was in your position. I was the ...
Jul 3, 2016
