Zedderman

I don't know what to say really, but i very much like this poem. the style what i have seen before but i still think that this is quite brilliant. ...

I agree completely with the message that i believe this poem is trying to get across. i like the rhyming pattern and the content of the poem. however, in the ...

That was very good if not a tad depressing. i feel that some parts are slightly repetative however, 14 out of 26 lines start in exactly the same way. this ...

Truly magnificent my friend! A wonderful double-meaninged poem of truthfulness and such-like. my only complaint is the rhyming pattern of A_B_B which, which i do not like. (my latent developing ...

This is great! i think that this song is wonderful and has some real meaning, and i would love to hear it performed in real life, but I dislike your ...