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I usually use a rating system, giving grades to various parts of the writing. Let me tell you now, I grade harshly, but when I give a compliment expect me ...

Your descriptions are wonderful but your action scenes and plotting need work to sound professional, though they aren't bad by any means. Character descriptions: A Lacking the plus sign even ...

The transition between normal village and spooky village was sudden, and it wasn't explained enough, I thought the main character was having a dream sequence because of how sudden and ...

The action scene at the beginning was poorly written, but it got the message across and I don't think it was a failure as much as it was a good ...

All three of your questions have positive answers, none of your concerns were manifested. Your description of the willows and the garden in the woods was particularly well-worded. However, at ...

I'm not going to analyze writing style because it works. I liked the tension from the main character running into her school enemies (I assume, I haven't read any other ...