Zaxivers

Hey! Thank you for your time to reviewing my Prologue. Yeaa I feel like there are someting that need to be fixed. And you pointing directly at it. It truly ...

Ohh hey! Thank you for your time to reviewing my Prologue. Yeahh I know it too, when the second time I reading it again... I just feel like there are ...

Well... The rhyme is pretty good actually. The composition and connection between verse is really good, but well yeah rated for language. The fit title that came to my mind ...