ZaddieCaso

umm, ella this should be in songs. this is poetry. lol

haha ella, miss popular person

wow.

wow. that was very, very dark. god, you don't do things by halves do you Ella? I loved it, abusloutley loved it, great start, full of emotion. I will give ...

yay, thankyou Mads, now get on and write that 6th chapter!!!

yay, thankyou Mads, now get on and write that 6th chapter!!!

oh come on, isn't anyone going to review?

Okay, I take back the post I put on Chapter 7- part one. Plenty of plot going on here, I'm happy :)

okay, i'm wondering if this really happened because this is non-fiction, and you should probably be posting in the fiction sections instead of here.

A ghost story? I'm really confused now, does she have dreams of ghosts? Or abondonment issues? I think you need to specify a bit more

Is this a multi chapter story?

You know how I wrote that, I imagined I was you. Not literally, but in the way you speak. :) thanks for teh review

I don't think I can edit this, its a bit to strong. I always read about situations like yours, but there in books. Its all fiction, not real. But this ...

Yep, its actually an extract from the last book Mist. So it is actually part of Racing Wind just from another point of view and it is from a long ...

I like the lyrics but I think you need another verse explaining about the butterfly girl bit. Maybe going into detail about why she is butterfly girl, maybe she flew ...