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Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.
I really appreciate all your advice thank you!!! I'm a pretty new writer especially when it comes to stories so all your advice is very helpfull!! I have some trouble ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: The Discovery Of Love
Hello! I really like this poem. My favorite part is how they both feel like the other is perfect but they don't know the other feels that way too. I ...
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: The Bully. Chapter 2.
Not a review but just letting you know I LOVED your second chapter! Leaves me waiting eagerly for the third! Keep it up this is awesome! :)
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.
edited it if you'd like to read it :)
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.
Thank you, I was actually thinking about how to do that because I know I have a problem with introducing too fast. I'm working on it and appreciate your input!!
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: The Bully. Chapter 1.
I enjoyed this so much!!!! I love the two sides of Felix, I can kind of relate except for the bullying. Anyway very good writing. And I think you forgot ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Goals of two types: Spencers Adventures Intro.
Okay thanks haha I'm new...
Jul 30, 2014
