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Re: Queen of Sins.
Hey there, I loved the name of this piece, I was almost magnetised to it! It was clever how you used the sins to describe the character that this poem ...
Nov 24, 2012 -
Re: Guessing
I think this is amazing, especially from the first-person address, which works really well with the context of a failing relationship (at least that's how I interpreted it). I think ...
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re: Nobodies.
This was really good! The way you used repetition and emotive language to create a dreary and almost depressingly realistic tale worked exceptionally well, and the tale has a moral ...
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re: Tall, Dark and Slender
You mentioned that you'd be writing something about Slender, and this really captures the horror that scared the hell out of me in the game. Of course, making some one ...
Aug 29, 2012 -
Re: Music Is In Everyone
I totally agree with the moral of this poem! I liked the unique layout of this poem, however, the rhyming scheme was awkward to follow, simply because it was all ...
Jun 27, 2012
