Yuriiko

-Don't drink grape juice while wearing a white shirt and driving to school. True... except that it's an orange juice. 8D Hey there Harshita! I'm not here to review. ^^ ...

Oh my. I wished I could write a letter too, so I'll be inspired to write again. xD I have to agree with most of the reviewers above me. And ...

Hey Jalmoc! Here as requested. ^^ First off, you portrayed the fighting scene very well. I have actually imagined it with little less confusion. There are just some parts that ...

Hey there Milaita! I can hear the bluebirds calling. As I listen, I can hear their song fade. The air grows cold and the sky gets dark. The cricket's music ...

Hello there Rose! I'm Yuri and shall be your reviewer for today. ^^ First of all, it was your title that attracted my attention to read this. Needless to say, ...

Hey there BlueAfrica! ~ This seemed almost like a prologue to me. Maybe it is or if not, it doesn't look like a short story. The concept you have here ...

Hello there Sheep Monoxide! Limp, lifeless, lonely, the muddy green material specked with dirt, debris and crimson. A mystery, lying in the dark, damp dirt; shouting guns explode. The stench ...

Hey there Ranger. ^____^ Overall, I enjoyed reading this. Very funny. I like the characters especially the unicorn and its sarcasm. And you portrayed very well Mud as a reckless ...

Hey there! You have a good rhyming pattern and every words at the end of each line flows and matches well with others. But it's better if the words used ...

Hello there Ranger! Long time no chat, eh? How are you, my dear sister? >8D Here as promised. ^^ ~First of all, your introductory line can be improved. You seem ...

Hey Roost! "Look guys", said I, "We've got a distinct lack of any facial movement or even verbal response. What are we going to do?" Let me give you an ...

Hello there Kyou! How are you? It has been a long time since I reviewed anything of yours. (man, I apologize for the delayed review.) >.< I finish writing the ...

Hello Azila! Honestly speaking, I wasn't quite a fan of a story like this, but you made it possible for me to finished reading this with a smile on my ...

Hello there Jojo! Although you have been a solid YWSer for almost a year, I still didn't know you were more into poetry than stories. Shame on me. *headdesk* Considering ...

Hello, Shubhi! Oh my. That's interesting to read. I want to know what will happen next so please let me know. ^^ The warm air enveloping my house allured me ...