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Re: Intimacy
I can't really find anything wrong with it besides you not mentioning the main character's gender. it's a little confusing if you're not paying close attention to the words you're ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: A Night To Treasure
Hi, Yanni1995 here! just wanted to say that this poem is really meaningful. it's beautiful as well. Now, on to business. As they lay here thinking and looking at each ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: First Love
Hi, it's Yanni1995 here. I'm new at YWS and still trying to get used to things around here. First off, let me say that I absolutely loved this poem. I ...
Mar 12, 2011
