Yagaron

Hey, Jagster! okay, first, are the rocks just for minerals or do they help break up food? (the teeth would do that). Secondly, it seems a little unclear here: The ...

Hey, Ygaron here! Just a few minute details First off, So make a choice and choose it wisely I would advise going with just "choose wisely" instead of "choose it ...

As Suzanne said, you could describe a little more about this person. Maybe tell us who the are and what relation they are to you (i.e. father, boy/girlfriend, mother, etc.). ...

Please keep within the appropriate boundaries of speech. Some people may find language of that type to be offending. Anyway, just a few things. I'm sorry, but I'm afraid you ...

Great work, Kyte! Although, as the others said, you may want to organize it a bit. It has no flow. you need to break it up more. You know sentences, ...

I do the same. I usually read a book or listen to music just before bed time when everything begis to wind down. Unfortunately, that doesn't leave much time :D