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The overall shape of this poem is what first caught my eye. I really liked the slope of it. Then, when I read it, I felt connected to it because ...

So this has a lot of beautiful imagery, and I feel like thats the entire point of the piece is to be aromantic imagery piece. But I do think that ...

I enjoy your writing style and the subject matter! I really do think you should continue. One thing I noticed is that you use "I still remember it perfectly" multiple ...

This made me want to cry a little. Its a really heartwrenching poem, but its also just so true. You did an amazing job. The one thing I didn't fully ...

This poem is exactly how I feel right now. I just want to hug it now. XD I'm not the best at reviewing poems but I really like this one, ...

I do believe he is writing in character. Just saying. So MAYBE if people treated it like that rather than an offensive blog post aimed at them, we could all ...

I really like this! It has a few spelling errors, and I feel that it needs fleshing out in other parts, but other than those few minor things, it is ...

I don't have time to do a proper review for your amazing story, but I really really want to! This is really interesting and I want to read more. I ...

That is a really well-written story! There's very little for me to pick on, just that I don't feel that the last couple of paragraphs didn't feel like they added ...

I want to continue reading this. I'm curious as to where you take it. Also I think Victory needs to have some trait of likeability so that the reader doesn't ...

I'm really interested now! Do you have more posted? :D I noticed one big thing. Rowan goes from noticing there were no open seats to flopping down in one fully ...

This has great potential! I noticed a lot of unnecessary capitals, but other than that it has good grammar, though a few misused words (quenched does not mean squashed. That ...

I felt the need to sing this while I read it. Its just so true! I don't think there is anything that I would change exactly. Perhaps add rhyme? Though ...

This just kind of made my life. Or death now I think of it. O.o Satan and Minos were sat in splendid thrones This one thing bothered me, because it ...

I like this. Its very very sad, but I feel like you captured the essence of his pain. One thing is that I had a hard time visualizing where he ...