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Pretty interesting, I think I'll continue reading if you continue you writing. It's a bit short but since it's a prologue it's not that big of a deal. Can't wait ...

I'm really enjoying this. It's very nicely written and a pretty interesting plot. If you write more please let me know. I would love to read the rest if you ...

Wow this is good for an 8-10 year old. It actually was written quite well. If you write anymore let me know. Great job

I didn't see anything wrong. It's ver good, I enjoy reading these blog posts/chapters. Good job. Please let me know when you put more up.

I'm officially hooked. I really like this, I hope you continue. Good job, and don't ever let anyone discourage you :)

This is a lot better then the prologue. It's pretty interesting so far, I hope you continue. Please let me know if and when you write more.

Nice twist, but I don't get why she'd just give up. If it was me I'd fight until the end but maybe this'll have more meaning later. Great job :)

Yet again you've made me wonder. Great chapter, it's sooooo interesting. Besides the SpaG errors we all have sometimes, terrific chapter. Keep up the good work

Yet again you have accomplished a wonderful chapter. I really like your characters and their personalities. There's a few grammar mistakes but other then that it was truley amazing.

interesting story. I like the plot so far but it was a little hard to read with all the errrors. I suggest maybe editing it...??? If not it's your choice ...

It's really interesting so far. I can't wait to read more. Great job

I really liked this, it was awesome. At the top instead of Tanya, it says Tanta though. Just thought I'd let you know. Other then it was great. :)