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So, I think this chapter was fantastic. The suspense corresponded with the mystery very well, making it intriguing. The length was very nice and the descriptions great. The only critique ...

Ti is very interresting. The mystery just kind of pulls you in, making you want to read more. The descriptions are good and the pace is just right. I can't ...

Ooooh, I think I'm officially hooked :) anyways this is very very very interesting to say the least. I really love the way you've written this and the way the ...

I really liked this, it was descriptive, beautifully written, and set at a nice pace. I'm not good at the whole grammar thing so I usually just skip that part ...

This sounds really interesting, I can't wait to read more. I like that it's unique and unlike what everyone else always writes about. Also, I think it was very nicely ...

I actually enjoyed this, I think it's a pretty good pace and interesting concept. I can't wait to see where you take it. I do think some questions have been ...

I really, really enjoyed this. Like a lot. I hope you decide to continue writing this and post more soon. If you do, please let me know. I'd absolutely love ...

I am soooo looking forward to more :) But anyways, I'm not so great on the whole grammar thing myself, so if you don't mind I'll let someone else take ...

This was really interesting so far. It has a nice pace, great suspense, and your descriptions are breathtaking. I hope you continue with this, considering it's captured my attention (something ...

I really enjoyed this, it describes exactly how I'm feeling at the moment. Anyways, I like the flow and the way everything sounds together. You did a beautiful job wording ...

Some of this confused me a little but I'm still absolutely awe-struck. I really enjoyed this, the flow was great, the descriptions painted a clear and vivid picture in my ...

I'm a bit confused too but I, unlike the rest, enjoyed this. It has a nice flow and kind of captivates me. I don't know, maybe it's my dark side ...

I absolutely loved this! Amazing job my dear :) I can relate to some of this very easily and the description was beautifully done. All in all this is a ...

I like this, it's an interesting way to look at things. I enjoy seing other people's views on things like this, it really makes you understand all the different ways ...

I'm a bit morbid so this interests me a lot more then it probably should. lol. But this was beautifully written, I loved how well everything just seemed to flow ...