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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne - Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review. It helps me with correcting the small issues. And to answer your question it is pronounced ti-vai.

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne - Chapter 2

    That's part of the mystery. *wink* But for you I will give a small grace. Do you remember what Fang said happened to those that are seen after being attacked ...

    Jan 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne - Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review. I appreciate all opinions and see them as a means to grow. On Re'ana's immaturity, I am purposefully writing her like this. I realize that ...

    Jan 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne - Chapter 1

    I am glad that you love this story so much. (Was love the word you used? XD ) Anyways thank you for your review. I appreciate all feedback, good or ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: Would You Like Some Cake?

    I am afraid that I don't have any plans to continue this story. However, I will answer a few of your questions. Yes. All of Fred's friends are within his ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne - Chapter 1

    When I originally wrote this, on my Microsoft Word, there were several paragraph breaks that marked the passage of time, sadly I wasn't able to get the program here to ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne - Chapter 1

    I would first like to say that I greatly appreciate your review. I see every critique as a chance to improve my ability to write. I would like to address ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Escape

    The other prisoner in isolation is an older sibling in a different room. It was the only way I could think to express this thought without giving away the ending ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unlucky Ricky

    I would like to say that I appreciate your opinions and review of my story. I am thankful for every review I get as I see them as learning experiences ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Tick Tock

    I agree with your assessment of the climax, but after a week of trying to find that missing piece to the climax, and failing, I gave my best and ended ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Tick Tock

    I very much appreciate your review and I would like to say that I agree with you. However, after spending over a week with this story on just trying to ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: For the Kindness You Once Showed Me

    I'm glad that you loved the story so much. I am sorry you to say that I agree that it there are very few people that are willing to be ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: For the Kindness You Once Showed Me

    Thank you for your review. I truly believe that kindness can be one of the most powerful emotions in the world. Even if we never accomplish incredible things, an act ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Faith & Steel

    This story has actually been published into a book and is available on Amazon.com. I may put up another chapter or two but those that wish to finish the story, ...

    Dec 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Secrets

    Dec 16, 2015


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