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Re: crying on the cross
WOW.. that is all i can say. Beautiful poem. Nice view of our Savior's death, and our new life. Wonderful. You have blessed yet another Jesus freak.Yeah, baby!
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: A Tomboy's Life [1]
really nice opening... you can tell a lot about the main character.
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Chains.
B-E-A-utiful use of dialect in the dialogue there. l love the fact that you use 1st person, so that whole "Momma" scene could be possible... really helps the reader actually ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Waiting..
other than what TIGERSPRITE said, pretty nice job. It's nice to get a taste of reality.
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: Teenager's World
more! more i say! I just don't know here this is going yet.. and i can't wait to find out.
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games
Hunger Games was a wonderful book... excuse me.. THE wonderful book
Sep 20, 2010