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To me it was a little bit short i knnow you probly intended it that way but still. other than that i get what your trying to say and i ...

Im not really into the script format but easier to understand this way also to me it seemed a bit random but not really in a bad way I like ...

Its a good start but also what kinda bothered me was the authors notes in the middle of the sentence that tended to confuse me more than help me maybe ...