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Nice! You managed to set a vivid scene in just a few lines. Your diction is simple yet effective, and your grammar is flawless. No nitpicks here, just keep writing!

Okay, firstly, thanks for being the first to review! The archaisms were intentional, as it's the monologue of a poet who truly believes in the daughters of Apollo (which would ...

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Whoops, still a little new at this! A little late for an edit now, my comment's above :D