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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Scales

    Nicely done, dragonofphoenix! Just thought I'd review because I can really relate to the topic at hand. Your figures of speech are unique and fittingly dark. The last two lines ...

    Aug 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two Sides

    Great poem! The contrast was maintained well throughout, though the flow got a bit dicey in the last few stanzas. If I could make a suggestion, I'd recommend you move ...

    Aug 8, 2014


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price