WrittenSoul

Hey, this is a quickie review (sorry, I'll try my best to do a better one later). I just wanted you to know I'm still reading and loving every bit ...

Hello, I'm Soul, and I'll be your reviewer today! I've got a few suggestions, but overall it was very good and an interesting read! *Ahem* Anyway, on to my review! ...

Hello, this is Soul here! Well, poetry's not exactly my strong point, but at least I can get the grammer and spelling eh? :D First off: It was pretty good, ...

Hey there! That was a pretty good script for your first try! I'm not sure I can give you advice on the finer points of script-making because I'm not a ...

Oooh! KJ that was very good! I really want to read more now! I didnt notice any grammer mistakes, and if there were any they were few and far between ...

Hello! I'm going to be your reviewer today! This was very, VERY well written. I'm not sure I can add anything as everyone already seems to have caught what I ...

Hello! I shall be your reviewer today. The first thought on my mind is this: Oh wow! That was superb! You described everything amazingly well, and I could see it ...

Hello! I'm Soul and I shall be your reviewer today! Very good so far! I haven't seen anything that made me go, "Oh my gosh! FIX THAT NOOW!!" So. Good ...

Hello! I'm your reviewer today, but don't worry if I get into nit-picky mode. :D Okay, shall I get started? “Yes sir.” He said as he saluted. Personally, I think ...

Wow. I can't wait until the next one-I want to (desperately) know what happens! Koreth!! NOOO!! *Ahem* Anyway, on to the review. It was good, and the things that I ...

I LOVE YOUR STORY!! I've been reading it for a while, but haven't had time to review! I only noticed a couple of things in this one that bugged me. ...

Once again, I really liked it!! Good job-and I was going to correct some things, but once again, I've been beaten to it! Haha. Anyway, I did notice a couple ...

Oh. My. GOSH! That was incredibly well written! I'd offer to show you some punctuation mistakes but it looks like everyone else beat me to it! Like everyone else I ...

Congratulations! I really hope you can get your story published! I know I'll go and buy a copy (and tell my friends to all go buy one too!). Good luck! ...

That was very well written, at least, I think so. I think I see what you mean about needing to put that scene in there. I mean, I'm not one ...