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Re: Daddy's Angel
Aw.. this is very deep in a way, but good craftsmanship. Right more! This story is a little shaky in detail so I recommend adding more. Great story line though. ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: The Letters I Never Wrote (Chapter one)
Very interesting. The narrator in the story obviously has some issues with themselves, and is so upset with himself that he caused this person to leave. But now he sees ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: Rush
Wow! That was so good! Great job! Everything comes back except time, that's why you don't want to ever waste it! You can never regain the time you lost, so ...
Jul 31, 2015