WritingWolf

I just skimmed through the poem again and I think I took everything too literally. I want to re-write my review now... lol

There are a bunch of different types of humor. I mean, from what I know about American comedies and British comedies the type of humor can be quite different at ...

No. I have seen Gravity around but I've never actually talked with her. It was actually inspired by me dropping something... again...

That would be helpful if I was trying to write a real poem, which I may go and do. But the purpose of this was solely to make people laugh. ...

Lol :)

Thanks :)

Thanks for the review. :) I honestly didn't expect to get any this long. lol I'm glad it made you laugh.

You're welcome. :) If you don't want to put detail, then go right ahead. I just want to make sure you understand how the reader feels with so little detail. ...

I'm glad that you liked it so much. But I will warn you that this is qualified as "review spam." Usually you will get reported for this. I see that ...

To answer your question, no, no one close to me has ever been in the military. But I do have very close friends who had loved ones in the military, ...

Thanks for the review Mess. I guess what I mean in this poem isn't as clear as I had thought. It's not so much that I think there's something wrong ...

Thank you for the review. You've really made me think about some things that hadn't come to mind until now. (I like the idea of making every other stanza a ...

I meant bought. I considered doing brought. But in my mind the soldier who return home brought freedom, while the ones who died bought freedom. Thanks for the review. :)

Yeah, that's why I normally avoid nitpicks. But not having periods all except for one time is just such an odd thing to do intentionally I figured it was worth ...

Thank you for the review! When writing this I was thinking about how miners used to take canaries down into their mines with them. That was because canaries are so ...