WritingWolf

Hey Wolfie! Here with a quick review for your lovely poem. I really liked the idea of this poem. You had wonderful imagery. It was simple, but beautiful. Thumbs up ...

Hey Fortis! Sorry I'm so late with this review, I'll try to be better about that in the future. I liked how in the opening you talked about the footprints, ...

Beautiful, gorgeous, amazing. It's just so wonderful! Yet another wonderful piece from the wonderful defiantAuthoress! I can't really give you your average critique. But because poetry is all about st

Hello Fortis! Here for a review as expected. Okay, so the prologue. Personally I really like the feel that you give in the beginning. You don't have a very good ...

Hey, Wolf here to review as a return favor for drawing Karisha (which, by the way, is pretty amazing). :) First off, let me say that I did find this ...

Hello Gravity! Wolf here for a review. :) First off, I want to say that you pulled off the short-clipped feeling really well. Almost a little too well, if I ...

Hello again SecreteJournalist! I can't tell if this is an actual diary entry, or a piece of writing from the viewpoint of your character. If the first, I really don't ...

Hello CatherinKanya! Wolf here for a review. I like the idea behind this poem. It reminds me of when I first started writing. It was light and sweet, not the ...

Hey Dreamer! Here to review your novel just like I said I would. :) First off, it's looking like this will be one pretty cool book. When I first started ...

Hello Pentingking. I'm not sure about what experience you've had with poetry, but as Deadman has pointed out this is not your usual poetry format. Maybe you had some reason ...

Hey there ConverseFireGirl. Wolf here for a review. First of all, I'd like to applaud you for doing this as a haiku. It is difficult to get topics like this ...

Before I get to the review, I just wanna say that this is amazing. Great job. :) I have to say that at first I was thrown off a little ...

Beautiful poem Rhiasofia! Lovely, lovely work. I found that the flow was a little off due to the lines being such different lengths. But due to the short line always ...

This is beautiful. I'm honestly not all to sure about how good this review will be, just because the work I'm reviewing is so good. I love it, I really ...

Hello Blues! It's lovely to see that you've decided to try your hand at poetry! :) I don't think I really see anything that needs changes, but I do have ...