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Beautiful! =D Thank you so much, Cal! I especially like that Ghost Love Score by Nightwish. It's wonderful! *squee* I loves it! Danke schon! *snuggles* Yet more inspiration as I ...

Hey Phaix! Glad to see you have edited this! It is already reading much better, without those over-the-top sections I pointed out! The emotion already seems much more natural and ...

Hey Kanen! I have read your edited version. You are doing much better on the prose framing--you're on the right track. Your edited version is a marvelous improvement from the ...

*moved to Science Fiction* :wink:

Thanks for your comment, inkwell! But this is a very old poem--about 4 or 5 years old, really, so I'm going to lock it. Have a great day!

Thanks for the comment, Matt, but this is really old. :wink: Again, thank you for your comment, but I'm going to lock this. Feel free to PM me if you ...

*moved to Fanfiction*

*moved to Fanfiction*

Hey! Thanks for the comments everyone! I really appreciate all of your impressions and suggestions. Thank you! Just to clear a few questions up. :wink: Regarding the logistics of the ...

Hey foxfire! I'm back to look at your edited version. Some marvelous improvement--you have a lot more character here and it is already helping to draw us into the story. ...

That is incredibly sad. She obviously has determination to write that much; I'd like to see all of that fueled into becoming a better writer rather than inflating her own ...

Hey infinite reality! Sorry it took me so long to get to this after you edited it. Now that we've cleared up some POV issues, I'm going to talk to ...

*moved to Book Reviews* :wink:

*moved to Lyric Poetry* :)

Tis a report, not a work of fiction. *moved to non-fiction*