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Re: The Graveyard Book
I'm reading this book now! :D I like it a lot so far. Very well-written and unique. Wonderful so far. :wink:
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Leather Shoes
Hey Kamas! I enjoyed this a lot. Again, I'm rather rusty at reviewing poetry, so, as always, take what I say as a grain of salt. :P Anyways, you had ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Candlestick
Hey bowie! Tis WD! Glad I finally got around to this. So, this was interesting; the idea of a man being dead at the table and the candlestick is nice. ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Murder of the Mind
Hey Oxford! I made it here! :P Okay, so I must warn you I'm very rusty in reviewing poetry, but I will try my best at your request. :wink: First ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: The Last Shred of Hope
Hey Mo! Finally got around to this! So, a lot of people have addressed the specifics of this, so I'm just going to comment on this overall and give a ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Night
Hey Kamas! This was really lovely. Again, I'm rather rusty reviewing poetry, so I apologize if I don't give the most helpful suggestions. :wink: You had some nice images going ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: This Day
Hey bouncing! It's WD, here as promised. :wink: This was an interesting piece--a good introduction to a story. I'm very interested if this is meant to stand alone or if ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: The Kray ch.1.1
Dreamer! You posted something! :D I really enjoyed this; you have a unique writing style that had me smiling the whole way through. Ryle is extremely well-developed and even though ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Cat Steps [1] DRAFT
Hey Rosey! I'm so glad I got to take a look at this; it's a really interesting first chapter and I'm already curious about your characters and how the story ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Maharaj The Magician [edited]
Hey Jiggity! Got around to this at last! :wink: Very cool piece you have here. As has been mentioned, I love the beginning; the way you introduce the magician is ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: The Most Beautiful Girl in the World
Hey Lena! It's WD, here as promised. :D Lena, you are a wonderful writer. I didn't feel that it was too disorganized at all. The flashes back and forth in ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Another Excerpt From Dream Catcher
Hey there hon! :D I'm so glad you posted another excerpt of this! The more I read of Dream Catcher, the more I want to see! I thought this was ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Missing Link-Chap. Two
Hey there Kate! I finally got around to this! This was an interesting carrying of the action; you're doing a good job of not making Rose too explosive here. I'm ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Missing Link-Chap. One *Edited*
Hey Kate! First, I just want to say this is a marvelous improvement from your first draft. There was a much better sense of Rose and her personality, and the ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Gods Of Fate- Prologue
Hey Tiger! This is an interesting start to a story. You have some interesting concepts and a few brilliant lines. I just have a few suggestions for when you get ...
Dec 12, 2009
