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Hey joshuapaul! :D I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed this story. I have taken a liking to ...

Hey there Zephy! Tis WD, here as requested to review your piece. ^_^ Because a lot of my comments are sentence-level and you requested this review, I'll take this paragraph ...

Hello angels_symphony! I'm WD and I'm glad you mentioned desiring more reviews on this piece. All in all, you have a very beautiful writing style. Your descriptions are unique and ...

Hello joshuapaul! This is WD and I'm glad I finally got around to this. I apologize for it taking so long. When I get requests, I like to read the ...

Hello JRS, I'm WD and this beginning to your story intrigued me. You have a lot of good ideas here and I'm here to give you a few suggestions and ...

Hey infinite reality! As I have said before, I am fond of your writing style; however, I'm very confused. I'll color coordinate the paragraphs based on the pov its in. ...

Hello there infinite reality. Glad to see a continuation of this story up. To me, this was a marvelous continuation of your prologue; the contrast between the prologue and this ...

Hello Belzer! I'm WD, nice to meet you. :) You have some interesting characters that you introduce in this bit and I'm quite fond of the initial impressions I have ...

Hello there Stella! I'm WD, and it's nice to meet you. This is a lovely beginning you have here; your writing style thus far is charming in its simplicity. You ...

Hello infinite reality! I'm WD, and it's a pleasure to meet you and read your story. First, I would like to say that your title is a lovely one, and ...

Hello there, HomelessPorcupine! :) Nice to see some lovely prologues still being posted in the Fantasy Fiction forum. Because I have such a weakness for Prologues and I have not ...

:D Oh, Cal, it's perfect! *hugs tightly* Thank you so much for doing this - you truly are brilliant. I especially love the songs Nothing Else Matters and Pirates on ...

Tis interesting. It seems you have a nicely developed fantasy world to work with, and you have some fascinating ideas, but I must admit I was bothered by the way ...

Oooh, read those a long time ago. I thought they were okay. I read all of them, but the first book was very slow for me - didn't like it. ...

Listen to Snoink and Rei. More details in this piece. Try to visualize exactly what this scene looks like. Ask yourself questions about how things look as you write. Describe ...