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Hi there DaughterofEvil! I'm WD, here to review your story! So, as has been said, this is lovely in parts because of its simplicity. You have a way at landing ...

Hi there Charlii101! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you! Haha, so this takes me back to the days of junior high and some high school with make overs ...

Hey there sweethearts! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! I had a good time reading this piece you posted and I'm glad that I'm getting ...

Hey there, Adriana! Interesting piece you have here! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you. So, I think you did a good job of conveying some of the confusion ...

Hi there Euhuman! Nice to meet you! I'm WD. So, I enjoyed a lot of the ideas going on here. You struck a few lovely lines, characterizing the main character ...

Hi there! :] Tis WD! Great to see you posting again! I'm excited that I stumbled across this! I haven't read your work in a long time. There is some ...

Hey there xMidnightWriterx! This was a good read! It's very easy to write funerals badly, to err on the side of melodrama, but this actually worked pretty well. Your main ...

Hey there alissende! First of all, welcome to YWS! Great to see you around here, posting already. I enjoyed reading this; the dialogue was snappy in parts which really caught ...

Hi there ShadowLight! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! I had fun reading this--you have a lovely style and I like the simplicity of the narrative voice. For ...

Hey there GrenadeCatcher! This is an interesting piece! The perspective here is unique--that of a ten year old girl, lying dead in spirit. You have a nice tendency to describe, ...

Heyhey Lava! WD here. ^^ Goodness, this was creepy. I used to be terrified of the dolls in my grandmother's house, so I can (sort of) relate to Lucy here, ...

This is a very interesting idea! It's pretty ambitious, tackling a point of view like this and you manage it pretty well. I like the simplicity of the language and ...

Hey there JediKnightMuse! Glad I got around to reading this! =D And also glad to see you back around YWS. As you're not really looking for feedback, I'll just talk ...

Hey there Skins! Got around to the first chapter! I like this! Maxxie has a very distinct voice, which is really working well here. Great job on getting that POV ...

Hey there Skins! Tis WD here! I'm super happy that I got around to reading this. :) Yay! So, you have a very nice writing style; it flows easily for ...